Hello I would like to offer you a translation of your beautiful game into Russian or Ukrainian. I am sure that in the Russian segment it will be very popular. I translated a very popular visual novel which is now rapidly gaining rating (how to date an entity).
Here are the ways to contact me: email (lisetskiyr48@gmail.com)
yo I had a play of your game! please remember that all I say is supportive criticism to help give some ideas to improve the game a bit more.
first off there's a decent narrative, we are introduced to two characters with a mysterious story left to be found out. the character designs are excellent and I love the transition from her with an empty stomach to full.
although the problems I feel are that the situational scenes go by a bit fast. it could do with some more writing in certain scenes to add more depth instead of what feel like a minute or less. I feel like a few more faces could be made in the future as it is a little strange to see them always smiling. maybe even a slight change in pose would be nice (arm behind head sort of thing).
as a demo of sort I really enjoyed this I would rate it an 7.5/ 10. I can see the future for this game and its looking good. a bit more work and you really got something here! hope you have a wonderful day mate I'm glad I got to test your game 😁
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Will there be weight gain
It'll happen at some point in the scenario, for now it's just going to be bloat.
I hope I can wait for the Chinese translation -- (although not realistic, but my own translator can't read the game engine)
it could be interesting 😁
excellent work so far, I'd love to see you keep working hard and land a spot in the Belly Direct this October :)
Thank you very much! What is the belly direct?
It's a showcase of all great belly games in the community. https://youtube.com/@ihopcanada?si=Zhu70dvCy5vzFyQA
Hosted on our YT channel
Hello I would like to offer you a translation of your beautiful game into Russian or Ukrainian. I am sure that in the Russian segment it will be very popular. I translated a very popular visual novel which is now rapidly gaining rating (how to date an entity).
Here are the ways to contact me: email (lisetskiyr48@gmail.com)
telegram(@I_lovemee)
о, буду ждать перевод
Hello, thank you for the offer. I will remember you for the final release of my game.
yo I had a play of your game! please remember that all I say is supportive criticism to help give some ideas to improve the game a bit more.
first off there's a decent narrative, we are introduced to two characters with a mysterious story left to be found out. the character designs are excellent and I love the transition from her with an empty stomach to full.
although the problems I feel are that the situational scenes go by a bit fast. it could do with some more writing in certain scenes to add more depth instead of what feel like a minute or less. I feel like a few more faces could be made in the future as it is a little strange to see them always smiling. maybe even a slight change in pose would be nice (arm behind head sort of thing).
as a demo of sort I really enjoyed this I would rate it an 7.5/ 10. I can see the future for this game and its looking good. a bit more work and you really got something here! hope you have a wonderful day mate I'm glad I got to test your game 😁
Thanks for your feedback, I'll make it better 😉
Good luck, are you using a game engine or coding it from the ground up?
I use Construct3 for development. I know it's not the best for making visual novels, but it's easy to use.
Cool.